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This is where the lede goes in a news story. It tells you the most important information from the story like who is involved and what they've done or are going to do. For example, the lede for today would center around the fact that San Jose Sharks will be playing a game of ice hockey against a mediocre Calgary Flames team tonight at 7:30 PM, and will be looking to rebound from a 5-3 loss to Phoenix on Saturday.

That's kind of a long lede, which isn't ideal. However, a short sentence here can ease the transition.

The second part of a news story is the nutgraf, although the nutgraf can also be the lede. I know, it can get a little confusing. This is the part of the story that tells you why this is important and expands upon what this story is about. The nutgraf for this story would be the fact that this game is important because it is one of only two home games remaining before the Sharks hit the road for a long nine game road trip west of the Mississippi. Earning points against a less than imposing opponent is a great thing to take advantage of before these long road trips, especially when your team has games in hand.

Now you have a couple of options. The first is to provide a quote from a source. This introduces an expert's opinion into your story and gives your readers a sense of learning about specific details they can't get anywhere else.

Since I consider myself an expert I will quote myself. Please note this will get you canned quicker than the last yield of tomatoes before winter if you're working anywhere else other than Fear The Fin.

"These next two weeks are going to tell us, and most importantly Doug Wilson, a lot about this team. It really sets the stage for what we can expect at the trade deadline," I said in a sit-down interview with myself. "Games against teams like the Flames are one of those matchups that you expect to win because it sets the tone for the upcoming road trip. A poor effort tonight is far from the end of the world, but with points at a premium, these are the kinds of games where your Coach and General Manager are expecting you to get into the win column."

The next part of the formula is to continue to structure your information in the pyramid style. This means the most important information comes at the beginning of the article (who is playing, why it is important) and each subsequent paragraph contains anecdotes and other bits of information that aren't essential but still provide value.

An example of this would be the fact that boy wonder Logan Couture is hotter than Hansel right now, with a six game point streak where he has amassed 4 goals and 5 assists. This would generally be tied in with the return of Ryane Clowe, who hasn't skipped a beat since returning from injury-- Clowe has posted three assists and one goal in two games since returning last Thursday against Dallas.

Star-divide

Another quote here is essential. Since getting multiple sources builds trust, let's head over to FTF Staff for a comment.

"San Jose looked phenomenal against the Blue Jackets and Stars, but left a little to be desired in the scoring chances category against the Coyotes," FTF Staff told a member of FTF Staff. "Having said that, I really like what the team has gotten out of the top six since the All-Star Break. They've managed to break out of the funk that permeated their game in mid-January and set the wheels in motion for an exciting stretch run."

The writer would then state how important it will be for them to continue to lead the charge for the Sharks. If they can keep it up, San Jose will be in good hands tonight as the Flames are one of the worst offensive teams in the entire NHL.

This pyramid style, coupled with a transition about the Flames offensive woes, would then lead us to the opposing team's players. Mentioning how Michael Cammalleri hasn't produced as much as the team would hope offensively since being acquired by the Flames on January 12th is essential, and listing off his stat line (2 G, 0 A, 8 GP) would help give the reader some context.

Jarome Iginla would also be mentioned here, and the writer would note how the Sharks have been able to do a very good job of containing him by matching up Marc-Edouard Vlasic and Dan Boyle against that line in both their games this season. A brief note about the last change at home is a requirement here as well.

The writer would then wrap up the story, build up the anticipation for the final line, and lead into it with a thought that isn't quite finished.

End it with some gusto.

This line is one you need to deliver with conviction.

Prediction: Sharks win 2-0. The Flames play a boring, formulaic game, with their lede composed of chipping the puck deep, nutgraf composed of getting in hard on the forecheck, and pyramid style information composed of puck battles all the way along the boards. Toss in some quotes about hard work and a physical game and you've got yourself the whole story.

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An example of this would be the fact that boy wonder Logan Couture is hotter than Hansel right now

Hanzal (PHX)

by Kojo on Feb 8, 2012 3:18 AM PST reply actions  

Zoolander (2001)

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by Mr. Plank on Feb 8, 2012 10:15 AM PST up reply actions  

Go McGnyan mojo!

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by dfh15 on Feb 8, 2012 5:53 PM PST via mobile up reply actions  

Go McGnyan McGo!

(That’s how I read that comment)

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by idunno723 on Feb 8, 2012 5:55 PM PST up reply actions   1 recs

Game's at 7 tonight, not 7:30.

I was disappointed to discover that this morning when grabbing my ticket.

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by OtherKid on Feb 8, 2012 7:11 AM PST reply actions   1 recs

Kipper

I’d appreciate it if Kipper would wait a couple more days to win his 300th game.

Go Sharks!

by milanahalek on Feb 8, 2012 9:39 AM PST reply actions  

The Sharks better bring it then

I’m sure Salty Kiprusoff’s gonna be extra motivated to win this milestone against the team that traded him for a pittance.

Rated M for McGinn.

by DownRUpLYB on Feb 8, 2012 11:38 AM PST up reply actions  

Trade

I was fine with the Kipper trade when it happened (he was not good enough to overtake Nabby when he played for the Sharks) and considering that ‘pittance’ turned into Vlasic, it was a great trade!

by milanahalek on Feb 8, 2012 1:52 PM PST up reply actions  

Who is Vlasic?

"Duh duh... duh duh... duh duh... Salsa shark! We're gonna need a bigger boat! Man goes into cage, cage goes into salsa. Shark's in the salsa. Our shark." - Randall Graves
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by JakeBot on Feb 8, 2012 2:38 PM PST up reply actions  

I believe

that it’s a type of corrective eye surgery using lasers.

by cachow6 on Feb 8, 2012 2:51 PM PST up reply actions  

Vlasic

Is the guy that makes the pickles…they’re very good pickles.

by milanahalek on Feb 8, 2012 3:26 PM PST up reply actions  

just be happy

we are getting a little TV time. Dont care what channel it is on, as long as it is. Dont get much sharks coverage out here in the middle of no where.

by Indiana Titan on Feb 8, 2012 10:15 AM PST up reply actions  

hahaha. hear that.

i’m from the east coast so it’s nearly the same for me as well

by StevieV17 on Feb 8, 2012 11:18 AM PST up reply actions  

Check out ATDHE.net

usually they have multiple feeds of each game.

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by NoR*CaL Shark on Feb 8, 2012 11:21 AM PST up reply actions  

In addition

I use:

lshunter.tv
sportshunter.eu

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by pjresler on Feb 8, 2012 11:24 AM PST up reply actions  

nah man the site is still up, they just don’t stream UFC fights anymore.

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by NoR*CaL Shark on Feb 13, 2012 6:57 PM PST up reply actions  

A big win tonight

I will be sitting in the row directly behind the players bench (a Christmas gift from my husband) tonight and last time we did, it was also against the Flames two seasons ago when we won 7-1 or 7-2. So I’m saying Sharks win 6-1. Goals by Clowe, Boyle, Handzus, Couture, and Marleau (x2).

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by winthecupsj on Feb 8, 2012 10:24 AM PST reply actions  

Oh and GO SHARKS!!!!

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by winthecupsj on Feb 8, 2012 10:24 AM PST up reply actions  

Is there any way your husband and I can hang out!? I’d like Sharks ticks for x mas!

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by will_hunter23 on Feb 8, 2012 10:51 AM PST up reply actions  

jeez! you'll be on tv! I'll look for you to make some sort of ftf gang sign!

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by YeahTommyB4ZGermansGetThere on Feb 8, 2012 12:55 PM PST up reply actions  

Yep just look like a brunette wearing a teal Nolan jersey and possibly a teal hat… I would say pregnant looking but the jersey is still big enough to cover it up. :)

No I won’t be representing Bad Boys Bail Bonds tonight.

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by winthecupsj on Feb 8, 2012 1:28 PM PST up reply actions  

As a fan I’m glad that there are no longer any stretches with 3+ days off the rest of the season. Hopefully the players are up to the task and can run the gauntlet coming out on top.

by Briceratops on Feb 8, 2012 10:48 AM PST reply actions  

I wonder what this is all about

The National Hockey League will make a major announcement in Detroit on Thursday, Feb. 9.

The press conference will take place at Comerica Park in Detroit, beginning at 10:30 a.m. ET. It will be carried live on NHL Network and NHL.com.

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by operation carrot on Feb 8, 2012 11:06 AM PST reply actions  

they just worked out the deets with michagain to use their stadium

have they annouced yet who the wings are playing? I wonder if that will be it
please please be sharks or preds
no canucks/blackhawks

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by operation carrot on Feb 8, 2012 11:29 AM PST up reply actions  

oh yeah

so then what can this annoucement be about, we already know the location and the teams for the winter classic?

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by operation carrot on Feb 8, 2012 11:33 AM PST up reply actions  

IDK

havent heard anything about it

by Indiana Titan on Feb 8, 2012 11:35 AM PST up reply actions  

it hasn't been officially confirmed yet

so that’s likely all this is. kinda like we all knew what the press conference for nolan was for days ahead of time.

Rated M for McGinn.

by DownRUpLYB on Feb 8, 2012 11:37 AM PST up reply actions  

Leafs and Wings

It’s pretty much been all but confirmed. They are trying to get Canadiens from Toronto to drive down as we all know how F’d Detroit is and are hoping to get the biggest draw so far.

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by winthecupsj on Feb 8, 2012 1:29 PM PST up reply actions  

Oops Canadians

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by winthecupsj on Feb 8, 2012 1:29 PM PST up reply actions  

They are trying to get Canadiens from Toronto to drive down

or get the Canadians from Windsor to drive up.

by calixtus on Feb 8, 2012 6:09 PM PST up reply actions  

I love you, fear the fin.

I type this from my desk at the office where I work as a journalist. I loved this thread more than any other even if everyone else may have not gotten the joke. The prediction was hilarious. Keep this all-star talent coming—it’s a good break from movie and music references I don’t get at all.

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by YeahTommyB4ZGermansGetThere on Feb 8, 2012 11:58 AM PST reply actions  

Reminded me of my news writing classes when I trained as a journalist. Spot on…

And you think you live in a non-traditional hockey market...
"I flew 5,000 miles for this?"
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by BritShark on Feb 8, 2012 12:01 PM PST up reply actions  

Hi-fives across the ocean

only with my silver copy of The Elements of Style, Fourth Edition in my hand

Waffles, Digimon, SETOGUCHI

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Defense wins games, championships, and my heart, as in the case of Avery Bradley, Jr., Boston Celtics guard #0

by YeahTommyB4ZGermansGetThere on Feb 8, 2012 12:22 PM PST up reply actions  

Hi fives from the south bay because I’m on vacation in Santa Clara and in fact off to the game this evening.

And you think you live in a non-traditional hockey market...
"I flew 5,000 miles for this?"
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by BritShark on Feb 8, 2012 12:26 PM PST up reply actions  

that's still quite the hi five

estimated trajectory

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by YeahTommyB4ZGermansGetThere on Feb 8, 2012 12:49 PM PST up reply actions  

Change the woman into one of the Sedins.

And the guy into Pavs.

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by Evil Stanchion on Feb 8, 2012 5:39 PM PST up reply actions  

it's a kardashian

HAVE NONE OF YOU HEARD OF THE INTERNETS

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by GhostOfLinkGaetz on Feb 8, 2012 7:01 PM PST up reply actions  

Yikes!

And you think you live in a non-traditional hockey market...
"I flew 5,000 miles for this?"
And if you want more of this kind of thing, I'm spouting nonsense on Twitter too...

by BritShark on Feb 8, 2012 1:15 PM PST reply actions  

Argh, epic reply fail!

And you think you live in a non-traditional hockey market...
"I flew 5,000 miles for this?"
And if you want more of this kind of thing, I'm spouting nonsense on Twitter too...

by BritShark on Feb 8, 2012 1:15 PM PST up reply actions  

Still better

Than Purdy

GO SHARKS!

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by ElvisVF101 on Feb 8, 2012 1:26 PM PST via iPhone app reply actions  

Prediction: This game is a barn-burner.

I actually make home by 10 o’clock tonight and get to watch the game.

Seriously, fucking grad school. Even living on the east coast it’s hard to get home in time for a Sharks home game.

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by PNK on Feb 8, 2012 5:22 PM PST reply actions  

lol grad school.

The guy living in my basement has a master’s in English. He makes $11.50/hr ($1 more than minimum) managing a bookstore. :D

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by Evil Stanchion on Feb 8, 2012 5:40 PM PST up reply actions  

$10.50 min wage?

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by JakeBot on Feb 8, 2012 6:48 PM PST up reply actions  

Check his signature
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by bezzerkker on Feb 8, 2012 7:09 PM PST up reply actions  

As a night owl, I’ve come to love living in the eastern time zone (I shouldn’t say “east coast” when I’ve been in places like Ohio and the southern Appalachians). Never had problems with 10 p.m. games, but I did stupidly ask for classes that ran until after 8 p.m. in the spring of my first year teaching in Ohio. Not cool come playoff time.

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by Timorous Me on Feb 8, 2012 6:06 PM PST up reply actions  

uhh

did randy just say calgary considers themselves a cup contender?

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